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Worthless

I failed once again,
failed at helping you my friend,
I've become so useless,
can't help worth shit,
used to solve it all,
now I just trip and let myself fall.

I can't seem to think straight,
thoughts all compressed,
I can't even help myself,
just the knife sliding across my arms,
the pain of the cut,
and the blood flowing down,
at least I know I still feel...

Dammit all to hell,
all I can do is listen,
but I can barely focus,
I'm sorry,
I'm worthless...

I think I've come....
come to my end....

Author notes

i dont kno... it sux, i dont give a shit... im fucking worthless...
Written October 31st, 2004

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  • Iktomi
    January 19, 2005
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    This is very good, and very painful. It evokes emotion wonderfully and you should be proud of it.


  • MainMatt
    November 1, 2004
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    Your never worthless!!! I don't know what I'd do without you darling, even listening itself can be doing more than you know