Prized wings lay pinned under framed glass.
Author notes
Here's my description of something beautiful.
Written October 31st, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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A few months back, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
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This is really gorgeous. It's short, yet the imagery is somehow really clear. And I love the meaning... it can be adapted to so many things. Very cool
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this is gorgeous. it reminds me of walking through the science museum and seeing all the beautiful butterfly wings trapped beneath the glass. sad and lovely all at the same time. this stirs up a great emotion. best of luck in the contest <33
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hm.... this sounds like it probably has some really cool deep meaning... hm... cool i likes it!
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