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Ribbons

Your hands on my skin
Cold, but blissful
Feels so nice on my neck

I love it when you play with my hair
I love it when you tie ribbons to it
They curl in my hair; you tie them in bows
Always different colors of brightness used

I can feel calm and relaxed completely
And I don't have to worry about anything
I can feel pretty for once in my life
And I can feel like I'm not worthless

Your loving gestures
Are my everything
I need you in my life

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Written October 28th, 2004

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  • Kelly Sue
    February 3, 2005
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    This is awsome I like it alot. it has a nice flow to it and is very nicely written thank you for entering it and good luck to you.

    Kelly Sue