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live your own life

you gotta learn
eventually
you gotta live it up
whenever you can
you have to follow your heart
no matter the cost
grab your dreams and hold on
use a iron fist if you must
do what you know matters
don't follow your lusts
think things through
try to no have regrets
live like there is no tomorrow
cause you never know what may come next

Author notes

it's been FOREVER since i have written...talk about being rusty...tell me what you think...much love-Jess
Written October 31st, 2004

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  • simply frozen23
    November 4, 2004
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    jeez, YEAH its been forever... and not your best work, but still grand.

  • kapaja
    November 3, 2004
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    I will tell you what I think, IT ROCKS!! Your words are so true. People need to hold onto dreams with iron fists. I like the line "Live like there is no tomorrow"... we should all do this... what may happen tomorrow? Nobody knows. Live it up while there is still Life to Live!! . This made me think. I was going to write you an email later, I wrote you a letter and it is being sent. I must tell you something new though. I have a University that I really want to go to. It is called Poznan University, it is in Poznan, Poland. It is the #1 Medical school in Poland. I love Poland so much. I will be coming back for senior year, then hopefully (if I get in) going back to Poland. Living in the United States after this is going to be extremely difficult, you don't understand, you can't even imagine! So yeah, that is the plan. What do you think about it? I want to come back to Poland eventually, going to Poznan University kills two birds with one stone, med school and Poland! . I love ya tons... LATERZ!! ~~Kasia