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Keeping it Real...





You were born an original, don't die as a copy...



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Written October 30th, 2004

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Last December, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feelfree to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).

  • luvmybabys
    December 15, 2004
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    GREAT JOB OH MY ,THAT WAS PERFECT,I GET IT AND I LOVE IT...GREAT JOB...LUVMYBABYS...


  • kotalu
    December 15, 2004
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    Brilliant!
    Edited on Dec 15, 10:21 because 'I can't spell!'.


  • forgotten dream
    December 14, 2004
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    awesome one liner. it says so much, and rings so true in my own personal life. amazing. best of luck in the contest <33


  • Foreverlove
    December 14, 2004
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    This is a famous quote. I don't think it counts! I asked fallXintoXme. She wants original things.

    Peace

    Edited on Dec 14, 7:55 because ''.


  • IrisUnseen
    December 13, 2004
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    yay!!! i loves it!!!! good job. one liners are hard to do. yay you!


  • Vickie J
    December 13, 2004
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    DING!!! DING!!! Folks I think we have a winner! This speaks volumes, need I say anymore?

  • mysticriver
    December 10, 2004
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    I am stunned!! This is one of the most original and inspirational one lines..I have read in this contest!!!

    GOOD LUCK!!


  • wohadreambig
    December 10, 2004
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    Amen to that! Rock on!

    Janine


  • ICaughtFire
    December 9, 2004
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    Wow. Deep and touching..Good luck.


  • hole
    December 9, 2004
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    great message
    good luck with the contest
    love Sophie


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    November 3, 2004
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    now this is a one liner eye catcher


  • Mozaic
    October 30, 2004
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    ah....you have been paying attention to my page I see...and yes it is, and so fitting of this contest....just things that make you go hmmmmmm..........

  • bstfrnd
    October 30, 2004
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    isnt this what you say all the time, even on your page hehehe
    nice though,its always good to be original

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