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Happy Halloween

October's crowded with autumn trees
Sprinkled with rain
It crunches as feet walk on top
Sun becomes dull, and waits for the next season

Be as creepy as you want
In trick-or-treat
Candy only to shut a person
To know another arrives

Time for scary stories
To wet your bed at night
Murder, haunted house with scary ghosts
To liven your day up with fears

Nothing like other events
To build up to this
However you put these words
Its still Happy Halloween

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Written October 30th, 2004

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  • lustfulviolets
    November 9, 2004
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    Thats cool. Its all about it. Its funny too.


  • NurseHayley
    November 2, 2004
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    This was a lovely poem but I feel it doesn't closely fit the criteria given... Not much twisting going on here it seems...
    Hayley x x


  • J Rhys Davies
    October 30, 2004
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    It’s funny how you can say the word happy before Halloween knowing that it is a scary time. I liked this. Keep penning.

    ~ John


  • rufina caraid gold member
    October 30, 2004
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    Not being a great fan of Halloween (not celebrated in Australia too much) I can't really appeciate the symbolism of the occasion. thank you for your entry though. Welcome to AP
    ~Von~