Fragile is my love for you
with my broken heart mended
held together with hope
that it will not break completely
Yesterday's tears stain my pillow
as your voice echoes untruths
once again I am overwhelmed
lost between never-land and now
Yearning for what should have been
looking into the emptiness of your eyes
not wanting to take the chance
I listen to that little voice that says
Run, run as fast as you can
take your fragile heart and hide
away from the shadows of pain
drown your sorrows in your tears
Erase the wants from your mind
forget the dreams before the sorrow
search for the reality of life
never to give your heart again
Author notes
Written October 28th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Worth 2338 pnts Picture Prompt (a must see) use background or pic for inspiration! Quikie contest 1 day only! by PurpleSky.
2278 points, ended April 28, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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this is a wonderfully written poem even in its sadness however this may have had more effect if you had used the picture I gave for the prompt instead of the one you have here. thanks for entering and good luck
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Hello Lena, Thank you for the nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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A different view of the picture. I'm thinking I don't want to be around her if she is so broken. She looks as if she can take care of things. Nice write.
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Lovely Coment m
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much. Take care, Sandy
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