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True Love Ways

T-To James the man I truly love,
R-Romance has filled my lonely heart,
U-Until you came into my life James,
E-Everything was totally falling apart.

L-Loving you dear has made me smile,
O-Only you can make me feel this way,
V-Visions of happiness now abound,
E-Each night you take my breath away.

W-Wonderful memories are being made,
A-Always and forever I will be true,
Y-Your love James is all I'll ever need,
S-Sweetheart please say you love me too.

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Written October 28th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 28, 2004
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    Thank you , you are so kind with your comment. I really do appreciate what you say. You are a wonderful young lady and a terrific poet. Take care, Sandy
  • Purplerose
    October 28, 2004
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    Fantastic

    This is beautiful, I love what you have done here, so pretty, and special a beautiful tribute! This was wonderful, two more thumbs up of this really wonderful piece!
    Purplerose

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 28, 2004
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    Thanks so much for the lovely comment. I always appreciate them. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 28, 2004
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    Don't you wish it was that easy, SMILE, I haven't known a James since high school , made for an interesting English class. Tenth grade crush. He was Greek God, it lasted 3 months. Oh welI Thanks for the comment. Take care, Sandy

  • October 28, 2004
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    arr lucky man james having all the love he can possibly desire, all he has to do is reach out with a smile and all is well

  • AnotherFace
    October 28, 2004
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    wonderful

    THAT WAS EXCELLENT!!!! HOLEY CRAP I LOVED IT!!!!! Like I've said before, I usually HATE love stuff, but yours always make me smile! James is a lucky man to have you, and I'm glad you found him! Beautiful poem!

  • October 28, 2004
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    A great acrostic! And a beautiful tribute to your love James. I'm sure you know as I do, it only gets better with time, it's clear in your write! God Bless and good luck in the contest, it's a beauty! Ann
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