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America's Finest

A soldier sleeps dreaming in Iraq,
his sweet family lingering in his mind,
will he ever see their smiles again,
or will fate once again be unkind.

Dodging bullets is a normal day,
watching for another mortar round,
reading letters from their loved ones,
sitting on the sand covered ground.

They are America's bravest and finest,
brothers, sisters, mother, and sons,
father, friends, daughters and strangers,
fighting terror in the desert's hot sun.

Being away from loved ones is lonely,
pray for there safe return from Iraq,
give thanks to our troops in Afghanistan,
give them a hero's welcome when they get back.

Please thank our troops so far away,
serving our country for me and you,
standing for freedom around the world,
salute Old Glory the red, white and blue.

GOD BLESS OUR TROOPS



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Written October 28th, 2004

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  • Bob Fox
    July 22, 2007

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    As It should be

    Another fine tribute to the very best this ountry has to offer. A great piece of poetry from a fine patriotic lady...God bless our troops

  • BHolzner gold member
    March 14, 2007
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    God bless our troops. Bholzner


    • Sandygram silver member
      March 15, 2007
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      God Bless Our Troops

      Thank you for your nice comment. We should all support our troops till each and everyone is home safe and sound. You take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 21, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for the nice comment. I appreciate it. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. God Bless our troops. Take care, Sandy

  • June 19, 2005
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    Great poem... thanks for all your support and prayers my boyfriend is 19 and is in iraq and i can't wait till he gets home so please keep him and all our other soldiers in your prayers thanks and again great poem i raelly like it

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 14, 2004
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    Thank you pozo. I always put my heart into these patriotic poems since my grandson B.J. 22 is in the Army National Guard and may be deplyed this coming year. I was glad it took third place in the contest. Take care, Sandy t
    Edited on Nov 14, 8:55 because ''.
  • pozo
    November 14, 2004
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    Wow, this is a great poem which I liked a lot- excellently written Good write, I liked it a lot
    All the best,
    Pozo
    PS check out my column The Right Times: First Edition

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 30, 2004
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    Yea it has gone on to long, time to bring them home. though I will support them as long as our goverment makes them stay.Thank for commenting on this poem. Take care, Sandy

  • October 30, 2004
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    and the war goes on, and i think it will for a long time yet to come. it's all a big ball of madness i reckon. good poem.
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