Night takes over and her majesty reveals herself to the waning moon
Allowing the wind to wake her from her slumber she spreads her wings
and takes flight gracing the sky with her beauty
Autumn eyes reflecting the light of the stars
Onyx hair flutters in the wind behind her
Translucent skin shimmering with heaven's light
Iridescent wings sparkle against the velvet sky
She mocks the other angels with her laughing eyes and silky smile
Landing gracefully on the shore of a lake all of nature comes to stare at her beauty
She walks along the misty shore dropping pebbles in the still water adorning the lake with ripples
She stops for a moment to stare at the moon with all its radiance
Then she starts for the forest
Gliding past the doused leaves dripping with the early morning dew
Allowing her white satin dress to flow over the green grass making
the butterflies come out to play around her porcelain checks
Making her laugh with joy
As she turns towards the horizon and sighs
A new day has come and it is time for her to return to her haven
to rest for another night's pleasure
Author notes
Sorry it took me so long to write this ... I've been in and out of a writers block so I don't know if its any good. And thanks to Hillary (fallenangel590) for the tips ... they really helped.
"I Love Flying Pigs"
Written October 27th, 2004
What did you think
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But I like the color of ink I used so
I'm glad you liked my poem but there wasn't really anything to understand about it ... theres no lesson or story hidden in the words. Its just something that I wrote for a friend. Thanks for the comment Toco. Loves ya 
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MY NAME IS TACO. HEY U KNOW U SHOULD PROBABLY CHANGE THE LINK COLOR SO U CAN ACTUALLY SEE WHO GAVE U A COMMENT. THE POEM WAS AWESOME AND I THINK YEAH IT WAS GREAT I LOVE THE WORDS YOU USED TO VERY NICE LOVE IT DIDN'T UNDERSTAND IT BUT STILL LOVED IT
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i changed my screenname on aol to chicoreq666 instead of 669 cause i won't let me back on my old one and it pisses me off
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yeah I know what you mean ... I wish it was summer again so that I could go out more in the night and not get frozen. Loves ya
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the pleasures of the night are what one may say the most wanted they are amazing they take place to to one desire it is amazing to see a beautiful night it the middle of the night with no lights around to diom the sky i love nature but my favorite part of nature is at anight the night life of nature is what i believe to be the best night life of all
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I'm glad
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this is still my favorite poem
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awe thank you ... yeah I'm going to try and write more poems like this ... but I just can never get out of these writers block ... oh well gotta love em. Thanks again for the comment and applause ... I'm glad you liked it
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wow i haven't commented on this yet.. sorry.... but this is soo incredible.
. oh my god.... this is so very beautiful and is just so full of magic and its just so mejestick. this poem is really very beautiful and its sooo good! wow i really loved this! you did an awesome job and i love reading these kind of poems from you because they are just soo incredible. very great job! i miss ya and love ya bunches!
love you,
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awe you and chris give me more credit then I deserve ... no what you wrote was not crap and the poem proves it so ha ... lol. Love ya
~Rachel~ -
awe thanks ... ya know if you read my poems every once in a while then maybe you would have seen that I have wrote a poem with imagery like this ... but oh well ... lol. Love ya
~Rachel~ -
wow i never expected it turn out as beautiful and this. ur welcome with the tips but i dont think u even needed them what i wrote was crap compared to this srry i just cant belive how amazing it is. u truly r a beautiful poet.....
love ya
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WOW I love this poem its soo magical and deep..and BEAUTIFUL like you!!! Well i loved this poem and I think its wonderful.....write more poems like this...its awsome and FULL of IMAGERY....I could see the whole thing as I read it
Love ya
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I'm glad that you liked it ... I've been working on it since August, but it took me longer then I had hoped with the writer blocks I've been in and out of. But I'm glad you liked it
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oh my goddess this is so beautiful it made me cry. elegant and flowing...so incredably spectacular..thank you so much
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