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VAMP

I want to be a Vamp
A tramp
A lady with a red lamp
I want to be a hussey
A floozie
I want men to drool over me
Before I beat them into submission
I want to admired
Desired
And needed to badly
I want men to shout
~~~I'm gonna love you madly~~~
I want to be exotic
Erotic
And also hypnotic
But
I will have to settle for being
Me!!
A nurse
A Mum
Full of passion and love
A wife
Who loves her man
With all that I have
But to dream of exotic
Well???
I,m just a little neurotic.....
So..I like being me...

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Written July 24th, 2002

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 16, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    loved it


  • Rodney
    August 21, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I too would like to borrow that outfit...oh crap....did I say that out loud?? I mean, very good piece.
    Loved the flow and ecspecially the content.
    Thanx for sharing.

  • Eventide
    August 9, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    *applauds* Perfect! Exactly as it should be, wanting something more, but content with what you have. Very enlightened.
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • afriend
    August 5, 2002
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    neutral

    I like it alot I wish I could wright like that. *sighs*


  • August 2, 2002
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    neutral

    this is really cool
    the rhymes work :)

  • F Etc
    August 1, 2002
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    excellent

    *giggles* Ahhhhhh I liked this one...
    Desire to be someone else but content with being yourself!
    Nice work!


  • July 27, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    You little hussey you....ducks before she hits me...lol...did you let Rick read this one? heehee! Great poem and picture...you little husseyyyyy.....lmbo

    ~Gayla~


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 27, 2002
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    lmao to all for the great comments..heeehehe need to get the dress cleaned and fresh gloves..lol...~~~GILL~~~

  • rvh1956
    July 26, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Lol.......always nice to fantasize once in a while :o)


  • July 26, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i'm gonna love ya madly, just let me get my wet suit on lol :)
    :p


  • Carlos Fandango
    July 26, 2002
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    excellent

    ooooohhhhh just give me a bed bath you naughty vamp


  • Maureen silver member
    July 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Really enjoyed this! How dull the world would be without fantasies!! Thanks for sharing yours! Loved the pic' and the poem!


  • Lone Poet
    July 25, 2002
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    excellent

    Aweeeee....this is sweet...'I,m just a little neurotic.....
    So..I like being me...'
    ...so you're 'neurotic', too? Just like me! :) Silly, cute poem...but sentimental and a bit risque...in a good way, and I like the background pic...little hard to read the words behind it 'tho, but I like it anyway...

    I think your secret desires and fantasies are similar to alot of us...we get tired of the same boring humdrum lives, we want something exciting and different...I can relate. :)
    I occas. have a yearning for dark, mysterious Vamps myself (as you can see from my poem you read, 'Giving Yourself (The Thirst)'...lol
    Just skip the neck biting part, okay? hahahaha...don't like seeing blood oozing all over! uck...

    This was really good! I like your style so far...will read more later. Thanks...Sheryl, ~LP~ :)


  • coffee-agh
    July 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    'YOU'RE TERRIBLE MURIEL' to quote an Aussie movie. Well done again Gill. Another knock-out, thank you -tj-


  • fantastix silver member
    July 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    lol at Birchwood...being you is all that matters though doubling as a vamp on weekends doesn't sound half bad ;) lol


  • July 25, 2002
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    excellent

    Hmmmm ..
    actually, I think there are a lot of fantasies about nurses floating around out there ...
    Hike that white skirt up a little ..
    I bet it will get some .. ummm .. attention ...


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Hey i want to please Danny me ole hubby send me the dam outfit lol
    Cute
    Where are you finding these photos you must telll me your my sis you know lmao
    Too tired to correct my mistake on the last poem forgive you rexhausted sister please
    read my new ones lol
    Blessings
    Susan~~~~
    xoxooxooxoo(((((((((hugs)))))0
    Edited by Blushfulmoon on Jul 25 because 'duh error~~~~~'.


  • July 24, 2002
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    excellent

    Excellent write... you mised a few places here where Nam drooled... Yuck!!!!
    LOL
    :)


  • Judas Denied
    July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    LOL! Dare to dream, right? It's good to know that you like being you, though. The pic goes great with this poem, too. Great work!

  • Ganja Man
    July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I want to WARM that chilly nurse! You write so well


  • July 24, 2002
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    excellent

    the picture goes so well with the poem
    the poem is totally outstanding

    mari_


  • Maltese Falcon
    July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Very funny piece. Without sounding like a perv, most blokes would prefer a nurse uniform over that gear any day. Ace poem


  • July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    that's just... really naughty! lol it's cute though.


  • naninina
    July 24, 2002
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    :)
    That was fun to read. And the background's perfect for this one.
    Excellent write Nurse Chilly!

  • Valkricry
    July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    welllllllllll, there we go with the naughties bits again I see? Too cute. I got some red lipstick you can borrow ;) luv, Val


  • July 24, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    LMAO this was great!!!!

    umm when your done with the outfit.... mail it to me? lol

  • the shadow
    July 24, 2002
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    excellent

    i got right to the end and then the picture loaded lol! one very interesting woman must have done this. hilarious.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 24, 2002
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    wont be a minute..just cleaning up after Nam..lol..ok done..thanks for the comments guys lol...~~~GILL~~~


  • twisted butterfly
    July 24, 2002
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    Gill lol...... that picture is brilliant and im sure youre a vamp in your hubbies mind honey and probably some of your gentleman patients imaginations too

    RAWR teehee

    ~Lisa~


  • Nam
    July 24, 2002
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    neutral

    droooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

    :0)

    Nam

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