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A New Day

Shed  your weathered skin
you have been born anew
Today is a new day
revealing the new you

There is no need to stumble
when there's a soft place to land
Find it first in yourself
then let others lend their hand

Everything must die
in order to transform
As our souls reincarnate
growth aided by the storm

Expend a new breath
waste not another tear
Dance to your own rhythm
face what you fear

Author notes

Written to remind myself and others, that there will always be a new day, for there will be many times in our life when we shed our skin to reveal new growth, leaving behind what held us back...
Written October 27th, 2004

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  • Lara
    November 24, 2004
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    I'll have to look up Tull. thank you for your comments.


  • powerslave
    November 24, 2004
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    Skating away on the thin ice of a new day. A bit of Tull there Yeah, your poem was very good. I especially liked your last line, because according to a man much cleverer than I , you are what you most fear. I don't know how that really works out though. But I liked your poem a lot, well done

  • Lost thoughts
    November 19, 2004
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    a great piece, about a great thought, it is true, there will alwasy be a new day, to start anew, to cast off our pasts and start a new future for ourselves.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    excellent~

    Well
    Nice to meet you & after the day I have had I need to read this one
    My mom had a heart attack last month & I been staying with her and worrying just about everything
    But you are right let today go for tomorrow will surely come around hopefully much better
    Once again welcome to Allpoetry and I felt compelled to click on your name and when I saw this title felt I had to read it
    ESP Perhaps but glad I did
    Also do hope you come see me as well
    Hugs sweetie
    Beautiful pic there of you
    Susan~~~


  • pulsating
    November 2, 2004
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    A new day has come.
    I like the rhythm
    and flow of this piece
    and it's beautiful.
    It's very cyclical.

    nicely done

    Take cares

    olivia


  • Marcellus
    October 27, 2004
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    Awesome! Sounds like you are at a fantastic point in your life. I wish you the utmost happiness my dear.
    Marcellus

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