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do you even remember me

do u ever think about me
how do you sleep at night
do you lay in bed and wonder
if im alive and alright
have you ever wondered
what im like
and what ive grown to be
do your friends know you have a daughter
that you hurt and just left me
did you not want me
was i not good enough
i will never forget the things youve done
a sorry jsut wont fix it
nothing you can do can stop the pain
the pain youve caused me is like a knife in my heart
everytime i think of you
it breaks my heart even more
the memories of what youve done will never fade away
i cant even describe the pain
each night and each day i lay in bed and wonder
what happend
what went wrong?

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Written October 26th, 2004

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  • Dead-inside
    October 26, 2004
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    thanx....its too my dad i kinda thought it sucked and i think im gonna make a second part to it but thanx alot


  • The Phoenix
    October 26, 2004
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    obviousely very personal, its great i liked the flow, wording and everything

    Great work (critique some of mine if you like)