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im sorry

you'll never understand me
    i dont see why you try
we used to be so close
    now all we do is fight
you've minimized my feelings
    you've tryed to hide the truth
you've never wanted to beleive
    im not the perfect little girl
im sorry i have failed
    i tryed to be so good
but everytime i fuck it up
    i look at your face and see the hurt
and when i dont do things right
    i always see the shame
i know no matter how hard i try
    it will never be the same
i used to be perfect
    but now times have changed
you dont want to beleive
   that things cant stay the same
im sorry im not good enuf
   im sorry ill never be
i hope someday you'll see i love you
   maybe youll appreciate me

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Written October 26th, 2004

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  • Ilykadothechacha
    November 7, 2004
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    dude, this is awesome! i know how you feel! i love this part the most:
    im not the perfect little girl
    im sorry i have failed
    i tryed to be so good
    but everytime i fuck it up
    i look at your face and see the hurt

    good job dude!
    Keep Writing
    JD

  • Taza
    October 27, 2004
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    awwwww me really like ur poem it is really got it is very catchy me can really relate to it


  • The Phoenix
    October 26, 2004
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    Awesome write, i really really like this alot. I can relate

    Great work
    (critique some of mine if you like)