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will we ever be us again

its hard for me to look at you
and think what used to be
how me and you were so in love
    yet now so far away
its hard to forget memories
    hard to put them away
remember all the times we laughed
    and all the times we cryed
when we sat on the phone for hours
    and told how we felt inside
and when i told you my biggest secrets
    and when you held me there
you told me it would be alright
    i knew you really cared
but when you see me
    what do u think?
do you still feel the same?
    and when you lay in bed
and close your eyes
    do you think of us?
or have you forgotten everything?
    do you miss my soft warm touch?
will you ever call me again?
    or hold me like you didi?
will we ever be close again?
    or is this is?
                       is this the end?

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Written October 26th, 2004

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  • Taza
    October 28, 2004
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    hey my like ur poem it is soo good and very interesting my like this one alot