As I try to open my eyes to reality,
sad visions of loneliness filter in,
the torment of too many memories,
overwhelm me, the nightmares begin.
Temptations were too irresistible,
losing control our desire was abound,,
unfaithfulness caused by loneliness,
slamming doors have a formidable sound.
Pleasure finally found it's completion,
two strangers meeting as lost souls,
comforting emotions shared in the twilight,
each one making the other whole.
Losing a lifetime in a moment of passion,
losing the only true love in my life,
one hot foolish night of losing control,
unforgivable breaking of vows as a wife.
Now my dreams have turned to nightmares,
as loneliness devours my tortured mind,
heartfelt tears fall upon your empty pillow,
happiness left with you, leaving heartache behind.
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Just a sad love poem I thought of.a
Written October 26th, 2004
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Thank you so much Linzui. You are so sweet to leave me nice comments all the time. They mean alot coming from you. Take care and I love you. Gram
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hey gram... great job.... its beautiful.. but very sad. i loved every line.... u have an awesome talent... i dont think i ever told you that. GOOD JOB....
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Gosh Ian even your comments are poetic sometimes. Thank you for the nice comment. I do look forward to your thoughts on my work.. And no, I'm not crazy.
Take care, Sandy
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the pain of breaking up is a mad one for sure, loneliness and heartache roam the heart and mind with stealth. cracking tears inside.
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Yea thanks Ann, I got the idea from my first husband cheating,I changed it around to sound better. Thank you for reading and leaving a nice comment on it. It is always appreciated Taker care, Sandy
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Thank you Melanie, I always enjoy hearing from you on my comments. You know I appreciate them. Tajke care, Sandy Hope you have a great day. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Serena for reading my poem and leaving a comment. I appreciate what you jave to say. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Steff, You are so kind with your nice comments. Take care Lov ya, Sandy
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Thank you so much dear friend for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. As you told me and I know now it is God who allows me to write. Take care, God bless you, Sandy
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Oh Sandy, could feel the anxiety in this one, and the heartache, good work on getting the point across, very descriptive, could hear those doors slaming, made me jump..... Ann
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Man Sandy, You're getting way too good at writing! Great work!
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This was just as amazing as all that you write. So sad
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How beautiful Sandy. I liked it a lot. I could feel the emotion from the words. Great write I enjoyed reading it.
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wow. I hope this wasn't personal, or about some one you know. and if it was -hugs-. This was excellent, Sandy, just as all your work is! It was a wonderful poem, sad, yet still amazing! keep it up. -Steff
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