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.::Tomorrow::.

It's just one more day,
But it's one that holds so much hope.
It holds people's faith
And makes it easier to cope.

Things seem better in the morning,
The morning of tomorrow.
Where people can draw strength
After yesterdays of sorrow.

If living for the moment
Brings too much pain,
Look towards the future
To what you can gain.

If darkness fills your life,
And theres no light you can follow,
Look for the hope of new day,
Because there's always a tomorrow.

Author notes

Just a little thought.

It's all very well living for the moment, but most people need faith to get them through tough situations. This faith usually lies in the future, that things WILL get better.

Hope you like it - I'm a bit rusty I haven't written for a while - but my new late october/early november resolution is to write a poem a day (because it keeps the doctor away tehe). Let's see how long tht lasts lol..
Written October 26th, 2004

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  • Candy6
    January 17, 2008
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    Very good write.

  • Virginia Logsdon
    February 1, 2005
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    Awesome!

    You have excellent talent and this poem is proof of it.I think this is so well written.It has good rythmn and rhymn.The words are touching,as well!You did a fabulous job!Fantastic poetry!


  • -diamond tears-
    December 13, 2004
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    this is a great write. nice and fresh. i like this bit the best: If living for the moment
    Brings too much pain,
    Look towards the future
    To what you can gain.

    I dont know why, it just stands out to me the best nice write, keep it up

    ~ A F ~


  • November 25, 2004
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    I liked this poem i didn't think it was really rusty...it was good and yes we do need faith..i need it to...i have so much stuff happening to me i can;t handle it...I just feel like running away or something a lot of times i just hate life sometimes and this is a nother day that i hate it.
    This was a good job...
    keep it up..hehe i liked the keeping the doctor away thing...well anyways talk to you later
    love
    starynite
    aka
    caitlin


  • Scarlett silver member
    October 29, 2004
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    Blue

    When I can't stand the present, I drift to the past. But as Scarlett O'Hara says "tomorrow is another day." And it is.

    Amazing write -- and a powerful message that needs to be stated frequently.

    -A


  • Sara Bellem
    October 27, 2004
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    This is WONDERFUL Sis, just like you ... Sis, I am so sorry that I haven't been in touch with you, my msn messenger never seems to work ... but hopefully we can IM each otehr back and forth on here until it works ... I'm so happy to read a new poem just you, its a great surpise and a wonderful, refreshing piece that makes you think and makes me so proud to be your sis, Good Job Sweetie! I am here for you as well, whenever you need me ---Sara


  • g r e y i s m
    October 27, 2004
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    a good message, and a true one. the only way you can get through during difficult times is to look to the future, and hope that it will be better. when people can't do that, then bad things happen. sometimes all they need to be able to do that is a kind word from someone, which is something you have always seemed to be able to offer to people.
    nice one here. hope your future will be good as well.
    Lea


  • just4uB
    October 27, 2004
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    inspirational!

    hi emma this was a much awaited poem ..i wanted to read some of ur work from so long..and to tell u frankly this poem really spoke to me ...it gave me much hope and made me feel so good thanks for sharing..i'm keeping the faith tomorrow will be full of rainbows and sunshines!


  • Mary Anne
    October 26, 2004
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    yea!!! Blue wrote a poem

    Oh yeah!! Oh yeah!! Blue has written a poem!! I love this piece. You are not the least bit rusty. I really do hope to be able to see a poem a day, that would be fantabulous!! So happy to see you write a poem. Keep up the great writing hon, I love them all.

    Much love to you,
    Mum


  • Hurdlergirl4
    October 26, 2004
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    This is a really good poem I can't wait to read more keep writing more poems!!! And this poem is so true there is always a new day tomorrow.
    ~*Mal*~

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