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Halloween Fright

ghastly ghost
galloping grimly
gaining ground.

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Alliteraku.
Written October 26th, 2004

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  • Kappa Pyua
    October 31, 2007
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    this is short and sweet, but not really what I was looking for in poetry, thanks for entering.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    Amazing!

    Wow, not seen this style before, different to Haiku. I like it, made for a good read. Good luck in the contest!


  • krymsin kyss
    October 18, 2007

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    short sweet and right to the point..nice job. thanks for entering and good luck.

    Avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~*


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    Very kewl piece! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of my contest!


  • haikumonk gold member
    October 27, 2004
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    silver lining
    of my stomach--
    Jason's knife!

    Don


  • Sherry gold member
    October 27, 2004
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    Spookey Gramps Boo lol Love ya to pieces Sherry


  • BillS2
    October 26, 2004
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    Clever

    Hi Bill:
    Sounds somewhat familiar in its story, about a legend. Excellent job of using the "G" words. Thanks. Bill

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