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Hidden Soul - A Soulfire's hope

so much emotion..
so little ways to express
the silence,
the noise..
the loud screams

buried in my heart
under a pebble of mud
dirt and rock
lies the beauty of
a hidden soul

strong fire of feelings
ever burning
burning tears in my eyes
wondering...WHY?

the silver rain vapors
embodies my life
fills me up inside
yet leaves emptiness behind

what is there left to fight?
any motion left to speak
urging me to carry on
and try..
try one more time

Hope is all that keeps
fuels the fire from the inside
trying to make it alright
and succeed one day
one day.. it will be okay

Author notes

Written as an expression of all the emotions inside.. and as a recollection of all the events of the past couple of years..
Written on Tuesday 26th October 2004 between 22:55 and 23:10 GMT+1 by Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter
Written October 26th, 2004

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  • seren
    October 27, 2004
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    No everything that happens in life happens for the best, even if at that time we do not see it, we realise later, and why it had to happen.


  • FiXato
    October 27, 2004
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    *me crawls up in serrin's warm arms..
    Everything happens for a reason, for better or for worse..
    it is our task in life to make the best out of the worst

    thx for your lovely comments.. appreciate them as always

    kiss 'n hugs,
    Fil

  • seren
    October 27, 2004
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    Love the language you chose hear, or else your heart chose it, and when you say emotion, boy do you mean it. Amazingly written, fantasticly vivid visually, but hun Laubear hugs are coming your way, so sad, overwhelming feelings of pain. I just wanna reach out scoop you up in my arms and tell you it will all be ok. What ever happens will happen for the best

    best of luck hun

    Luv ya


  • WinglessAngel3
    October 26, 2004
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    Wow...I just love the imagery and color and...wow that is like amazingly written...I absolutely loved it