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Everything dies alone

Inhaling a paradox of patrolium lies
And superficial heart shaped promises
I slip further into my personal de-evolution
Acid razor lined tongues
Move rythmatically
To the dialation of a crystal iris
While my "exocarp is stretched taught
On the wings demoral angels"
Valium induced realization
Coke infused desperation
Napalm ideals drift irridecently
Within the gasoline fused smoke of your ciggeret
Intoxication
Torrefaction
Divinity within the hollow tip of a needle
Not as hollow as your faith in me
Disregarded fragments of our obligatory youth
Rest subliminally within a tear
Lost in a bottle
Salvation
Ignorant perfection
Rust addicted teen maniquin punk rock casualties
Delivered in re-sealable packages
Buy one get one free
Madic sepia stained misunderstandings
Take form as we breathe mechanical death ballads
From pretentious self deluded assumptions
And in the end...
Everything dies alone

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Written October 25th, 2004

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  • Jesica Smart
    October 26, 2004
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    perfect

    OMG! I LOVE THIS POEM! You wrote it soooo well, its awsome. I've been tryin to find a poem on this site, which involves deaper thinking, and you've acomplished that very well!! Its awsome! I'd quote a certain line, cept i like it all.l8r