Too long...
You have lived as a lustful distraction!
Auburn hair against alabaster flesh,
Traces of stubble, a proud chin.
A vision, those piercing blue eyes.
Flowing at the mere thought-—
Of able hands, and taunt bodies,
Quivering with mutual desire,
Thrusting tongues, and hungry mouths.
Moist, warm breath, playing ‘cross silky
excited flesh, perky with anticipation;
Barely tracing fingers, glide quickly, easily.
Air, thick with musk-- all natural perfume.
Self manipulation, my only salvation.
Satisfaction-- a delusion at best,
Urgency has consumed my morality.
As a woman-- I wait, and dream…
of loving you.
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Written October 25th, 2004
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Great job on this! I loved the over all emotion and caring in this poem.. and I have to admit the part about "thrusting tongues and hungry mouths" was my favorite part! keep up the good work!
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
Love,
Kid
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Thank you, Chris!
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I was on thinking the other day of how many ways we communicate and reach one another as a couple, there are so many ways we touch and often hurt one another with word’s looks or even temperament. And so many of these are stored like photographs in a camera of the mind. You an indeed make your readers look at a situation in deep reflections with your thoughts.
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I usually shy away from commenting on things of this nature, because I embarrass too easily when I read this kind of stuff, but I felt compelled to. This was really nicely written. I really enjoyed it.
~ John
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Thank you, Val!!
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Now THIS is a prime example of erotica! Extemely well done!
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ThankS, Lady!!
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Beyond hot....very explosive and well written besides! A definite "Turbo-speed on the fan" read! MLP...S
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Cool! Thanks,Lady
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Damn. Im blushin'!
Self manipulation my only salvation.
That says it all. This was great. peace. -
Gypsy- You said you'd be by- and you were!! Thank you so much!!
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LadyUnique- I'm glad you found this hot!! Thank you for stopping by!
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Thanks to you for reading Goddess!!
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This is a masterpiece! Such strength, even with the sorrow, it has a glamourous appeal of wanting and yet not really needing in a sense. Very well written!
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hot!
sensual, it says it all yet it doesn't... just enough words written and lust conveyed to enable one to envision the parts you haven't delved into.
did i mention hot??
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awesome
SO UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL!!!I am at a loss of words!
I loved the line:
urgency has consumed my morality..
(doesn't this happen far too often??)
great write!
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