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Shapes

Missing image
In abstract I was not right, angled, obtuse
Yes, but no 3-D novelty puzzle to pass time
Rather, a real boy once like Peter Pan
Or that kid who owned Lassie.
And I had love with inhalation
I had faith with new deception
Tire swing with aging rope
Fish tank hobbies, and no
interest in flesh, or dope.

Now, I am bender, acutely inobvious
Razor down on eye, split at the tuft
Deleterious -- Dark like Merlot and
Chamber music on a Monday night:
Sports, long gone
Chess, squareless
Bed wetting just when drunk
Girls, Brazilian & Hairless.

Pill for tomorrow
Joint for today
Blow job, both ways
Smack for the spoon
Powdering the nose
I'd retrieve my name
If I could see my toes.

Friends by the bus, and fame at my
door, but can I get through to my inner
whore? Shapes, these shapes, are of
me, and when I squeeze my palms to my
face I recall Jesus, and Budha, my mother,
and Bermuda.

Yesterday, rectangle beds and round cakes.
Tomorrow, spheres crafted by aliens
Yesterday, a long straight plate of
Spaghetti, and sour table wine.
But that's dinner in-real time,
Not some man I see mirrored
By money and necessitous
Long term shifting, life in
Lycanthropic transparencies.

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Written October 25th, 2004

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  • horus8 gold member
    October 27, 2004
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    Yes, it is actually.


  • Virago
    October 27, 2004
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    Brazilian and Hairless - isn't that redundant... This is a wonderful look into your, sometimes extremely twisted, mind!
    Love this!
    Cheers!
    Laura
    Edited on Oct 27, 4:36 p.m. because 'sp'.


  • B2oH
    October 25, 2004
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    That's really what you get for looking in the mirror. When the angles are obtuse, you gotta approach from the fourth dimension (or so I hear).

    I like this. The subject is horrible....but the glimpse rings true.


  • TheWhiteKnight
    October 25, 2004
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    wow. sounds like a hard life. Great write. Thanks for letting me into your head.