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To my Anonymous Again

I once started loving you long ago,
many great poets you could outflow,
admirance for you is what I held,
over time to you I became compelled,
I left a comment here and there,
of me I wanted you to become more aware,
i sit uncertain if it happened,
but knowing that my feelings deepend.

You are the being I long after,
turn my world from it's disaster,
Wish someday you would love me too,
oh if only that you knew..

but for now that I love you is all you need to know
and maybe someday you'll understand the feelings I show.

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Written October 24th, 2004

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  • Piscean soul
    October 26, 2004
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    Man, I feel what you're saying. that's just amazing. I've felt it many times. man, I could relate to this! well written.
    --your mama

  • That One Guy
    October 25, 2004
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    you should really tell this person how u feel .....good luck man cant really say ive ever been in ur position but im pretty sure it must suck

  • Seraph1885
    October 25, 2004
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    I still stand upon my previous advice honey... soon you'll get your feelings returned if not then an answer for them good luck
    love ya always
    Meera

  • JPuchyr
    October 24, 2004
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    it sucks to love someone and not get it returned, or not have them know how true and real your feelings are