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prison

i am a prisoner of love
i've been taken captive by this
and am being held
by the cell that now
surrounds my heart.
will i be set free
or will i be bound
and held forever?

Author notes

kinda short. i just kinda had written some thoughts down and it all came together like this.
Written October 24th, 2004

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  • YourMomWritesPoetry
    November 29, 2004
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    aww this was really really really really good. Very short and straight to the point. Awesome write, wonderful really. Great job and keep it up.
    ~Frankee


  • crystaltips
    November 23, 2004
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    wow- well done GR8 write keep it up
    Crystal xx


  • mynameisnoone
    November 23, 2004
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    I agree with stenise22....and short isn't always bad, you've captured an image and that's all that matters.

  • stenise22
    November 11, 2004
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    Awesome imagery...I love that cell surrounds my heart line...so cool.