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Faceless

Looking out my window

seeing the troubled world below

I sit at home

Without a trace

For many years in a row

I stay in my house

keep my shoes on

won't join your worrisome world

I am the monster you never see

I am , to you

What you want me to be

So make up your stories

Tell all your lies

I will not come out

After your numerous tries

I am like the mouse

Feeling safe at home

I have seen your world

Nothing is left to know

For no matter what you try

no matter what you do

I will see your face

But remain faceless to you

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Written October 24th, 2004

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  • sweetrevenge55
    December 29, 2004
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    this is good... i cant say ive felt like this to an extent neway.. but i can feel the hurt flowing threw every line.. i enjoyed it keep up the good work love ya chelle


  • Anathematized
    October 25, 2004
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    hmm sounds like me typed out in poetry. yay.


  • enymatik90-09
    October 25, 2004
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    i do not get ya comment bakk @ 'em Jay, bu' I do get ya peice and it rocks me boat, eh?!


  • JadedxEvil
    October 24, 2004
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    this sn was hacked and the password was changed so hit me up at this name everyone


  • BehindTheSorrow
    October 24, 2004
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    Hmmm.. deep, thoughtful, and hard to interpret. : / lol. It's cool though.. sorry I suck so bad at interpreting; jeez.. lol.. wtf. I like the way this is written though, and the kind of anger/lonliness it portrays. Good job !

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