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Scary Pumpkin

face crooked
bewitching in the night
scary pumpkin

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A contest entry

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  • ea silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    I do find their crooked smiles bewitching sometimes, as the flickering candles turn them from friendly to sinister. Happy Halloween!


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 27, 2005
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    Cute and scarey

    Short thatas for sure. Crooked face...Yuk I am scared already. LOL
    Good luck in the contest. This was cute. LOL
    Hugs
    Jan

  • kendhal22
    October 24, 2005
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    Thank you for such high praises on my poem and enjoying as well. Kendhal22


  • ImJustALostMemory
    October 24, 2005
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    good

    oh my so lovely! its all short and stuff yes i liked it! I think you could have done something more with this write but i like it! thanks for entering and good luck.!!
    <3
    JiGgLeZ