I see you flying on angel wings
And I know that you are gone
Your bright, white wings spread out wide
And you fly far away
I try so hard to spread my wings
And join you in your flight
But my wings are broken and it hurts to fly
They're blood stained and too weak
As hard as I try to bear the pain
I'm just not strong enough
I want to be there beside you
But my wings will never heal
They bleed black blood from my pain
I'll never be able to fly
I'm stuck here on this dirty road
I keep wondering when I'll die
So I can finally be with you
If only on the ground
I wish I had a chance to say to you
That I'd always be your friend
Please come and help me
Heal my wings so I can fly
I can't do it on my own
On you, I need to rely
Heal my angel wings
So that I may spread them out wide
Heal them so that my soul can fly
My angel wings are forever broken...
Author notes
Written October 22nd, 2004
A contest entry
- Blah.. Hate Titles.. 6 Choices! by bloodislikewine.
300 points, ended March 8, 2005, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Good write but so so sad
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This is a very beautiful poem..I'm at a loss for words..but this is great! Stay strong and write on!
twizted bizkit -
Very sad if a little forced. But not a bad job overall. Great write, keep it up.
~CT -
this poem seems a little too cliche and forced. I also think it would benefit from some punctuation.
just my opinion.
thanks for your entry..
~O -
Very nemotional. I loved the flowing imagery, it set the piece alive. The word choice was excellent. Great...great write.
[ - Stinger Bee - ] -
Such a sad story yet you did it beautifully
Wonderful job on this darlin. You are talented in all forms of writing
*~le tigre de nuit~*
~!~Rosey~!~
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