~ Essence Of This Night by Lonely at All poetry

A dedication of the day, crescent sight
The liberty of fairness, rainbow of the night
True accent of nature, longing of the sky
Purified atmosphere, forgotten silent sigh

Refreshing wind, a bleeding rose alone
Tints of silver-blue, grayness of the stone
Endless tune of guitar, serenity in the pain
Black rider of the night, awaiting the rain

Wounded hues of violet, joys of void woes
Traveling through the life, fearing no foes
Memories remain alive until the rise of light
Deep within me, in the essence of this night

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Written October 23rd, 2004

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poeticweaver
December 2, 2008

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Excellent Write!
I enjoyed this, and me being the rap star I am, I could make this song flow girl, and wow, what talent you have. This is the bomb, and I love it like a fat boy loves cake. Ya dig, I appreciate. Much mad love, your boi, T Weaver~ Muuuuuaaahh!!
mina nagi
April 2, 2007

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Sneaking in on tiptoe while you must be snoring...grrrr grrrr hey, your words depict my feelings of the night... brilliantly written... OMG I've just realised this was written three years back
you must be very little Doll then...
I love your poetry... it tinkle ones heart string....

mina
Lonely
July 18, 2005
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thanks Dj
Lonely
July 18, 2005
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Thank you
Playful Angel
July 17, 2005
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this was very well written i must say. it flowed beautifully! and the imagary used was really good. thank you for entering and good luck!
Dj Djox
July 17, 2005
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nice poem well write , short datz y i like it keep it up
Lonely
July 1, 2005
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thank you
February 1, 2005
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my favorite i think
okay im back from lunch now...
this is a very very beautiful poem. wow just, wow you painted this picture with your writing. the ending really got me. endings hit me the most and you just wrapped it up and finalized your thoughts so brilliantly in this it took my breath away.
georgeous poem... i love it!!
-sabrina
StevenHoward
January 13, 2005
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Beautiful
You are so good with this genre. You have a gift of sight that allows you to be able to paint so vividly with your words. I can see every line as I read. Your rhyme adds so sweetly to your work. This is absolutely beautiful work.
wishintreeUK
January 10, 2005
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This really is exceptional! your rhyming is spot on, your use of nature as a theme has been an excellent choice, through this, you have been able to make your poem come alive through your choice of words.
It puts your reader right into the core of your write!

~Katie~
velvetsoul
November 25, 2004
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very good!
wow! u r really good! this poem was WONDERFUL! i can't believe how great it was! well keep it up!
Lonely
November 24, 2004
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Thank for the comment Carrie
Always4you
November 24, 2004
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This is a really beautifully written poem, it flowed brilliantly and i really enjoyed reading it. The language you used is also really elegant and again adds to the flow of the poem.
Great worl

Thankyou for your comment on my poem "I'm sorry" it was lovely
xCarriex
Lonely
November 21, 2004
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Thanks angel, I am glad you liked this poem

Love,
Lonely~
Phoebe
November 21, 2004
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the most outstanding thing in this write was the colors... they shone through and really brought the reader into it. i absolutely loved the "rainbow in the night" image. usually i think rhyme can sound choppy if made too obvious, but in this poem, it was so subtle that not only did i barely notice it was there, but it gave momentum and flow to the write. beautiful poem, keep writing!
xpoisonxgirlx
Just4u
November 2, 2004
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Dual runs the course on which we stand
And each does play, a helping hand
A tug between the day and night
A shifting stance, tween wrong and right
An urge to hide, it's pain decrease
But facing fears, I find release
And so I stand before you whole
Dual brought me there, how could I know

Eddy
cuteness
October 30, 2004
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wow babe, this was awesome... im sorry i havent read ur stuff in a while..... im not good with keepin up..haha! this was beautiful sweetheart.... i loved it.... u always write the most beautiful things!!!!
Love, Linzui
The Eros
October 25, 2004
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excellent
it was rather an essence of a life , combining so many things in one dash and man you got away so easily out of the poem, when i started reading i thought it to be a big one but no, you done a great job ending it , remarkable yaar.
BluexxEyes19
October 24, 2004
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Such a wonderful poem Sehrish! I love it and everything it encompasses....Nighttime is my favorite time and you described it perfectly!
Love, Megan
Almighty Aphrodite
October 24, 2004
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I get a picture of "the rose that grew from concrete"--a special beauty, one who fought the struggles of her world to take roots and rise from a harsh environment. This is deeply vivid and rich with emotion, although for you that is always. I am sorry for not coming to see your work earlier, I am quite depressed over other things right now and plus I am in the middle of typing a paper for someone--who says he will pay $25 to have it typed. I guess teaching myself the skill has begun to pay off!

A lovely poem from a lovely person...

Many blessings,

Raven Aurora ("Mama")
Lady Bird
October 24, 2004
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This is extremely vivid and moving...I get a lot of great images from this and the flow is wonderful...very descriptive...I love your word choice as well and this is very well written.

-Emily
emajination
October 24, 2004
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Very vivid, very moving. I especailly like the part:

Refreshing wind, a bleeding rose alone
Tints of silver-blue, grayness of the stone

It spoke to me. Great write, keep up the good work.
sherrie baby xox
October 24, 2004
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Wow, this was awesome, It was really descriptive, I loved the words you used in this. Great job!~

~sheri
Diamond2007
October 24, 2004
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Great job... the flow and imagery are great here... and "Endless tune of the piano" I love that part... it was wonderful.. of course I have this thing with music. Great write.
inyourbloodstream
October 24, 2004
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Awesome... The flow and the imagery... Awesome... Great job... I love every line... So awesome... A simply beautiful write...
liquid voices
October 24, 2004
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Simply beautiful, is just the perfect phrase (for me) to describe this poem. It's like a breath of fresh lavender at and restless noon. I loved some of the images in here, "wounded hues of violets," "rainbow of the night"...

~lqv
Willow
October 23, 2004
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Such images I get from this, sis. A beautiful rose that grows out from the rock. Being ever so touched by moonlight. Kissed by the dew. Just fabulous.

Love,
~Sally~