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Autumn

Flamboyant foliage

tangos


joyously


pirouetting


to mother natures


melody!




Patricia Gibson-Williams


October 23, 2004

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Make me know it's Autumn in 10 words or less
Written October 23rd, 2004

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  • carlspenc1
    October 26, 2004
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    wow` such beautiful poetry in so few simple words
    thank you for sharing
    and
    happy scribbling


  • poetryality silver member
    October 24, 2004
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    What a wonderful picture you paint with words. This poem surely makes me know it is Autumn. Thank you for it's brilliance!