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An Incredible Love Song



I want to sing an incredible love song.
I want to sing about you and me.
I want to sing about the first time
our bodies moved in harmony.

I want to play the music real loud,
for the whole world to hear.
I want the beat to bring you closer.
Let the me sing softly in your ear.

I want each note to make you smile
and remember the time that we shared.
I want to sing the chorus together
and remember how much you cared.

I want the words to lift your spirit.
I want each line to reflect our energy.
I want to sing an incredible love song
to make you fall in love with me.

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Written October 22nd, 2004

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  • lollylou
    March 31, 2005
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    awww. this is really reall sweet I am so impressed with this i'm gonna show it to my fiance as my own... nah not really. terrific piece. wish i had though of it. Lolly x


  • CherryRain
    March 13, 2005
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    How very sweet. ty ... music to my ears.

  • Just4u
    March 1, 2005
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    Then part those lovely juicy lips
    and let your voice be heard
    Sing the song he wants to hear
    and he'll hang on every word

    Tempt him with range of pitch
    and softness of your voice
    Then in end he will be yours
    for he'll have no other choice

    Hugs...Eddy

  • Kaptured
    October 23, 2004
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    Nice work, if only i could do that to my long lost love!!