information exuding into the Brain
like a poison, infesting every thought
pressure from school
from parents
friends and colleagues
there's no way out
new era erupting
faster, better, smarter
is this really a good thing?
over stressed, over worked, over weight
getting closer to reality
drugs corrupting the youth
yet parents take more than them
off the street
from the doctors office
whats the difference?
SEX, the activity of choice
ST D's
teen pregnancy
no future really
so what is every one looking for?
what is the big deal about the next generation?
you've taught us wrong
mabe not at all
pushed too hard
faster, better, smarter
over stressed, over worked, over weight
i just wish the world would
STOP!
Author notes
sry it was a little longer but the lines are short so i thought maby it wouldnt be too bad i dunno ok so yea i commented on a few poems here but the ones that i remember that i commenter on are my beautiful sister and ciggarette and i commented on pollie want a cracker and something about words sry forgot the tittle but it was awsome those 2 r urs im sure u knew that one but hey! lol laterz ~X2c~
Written October 21st, 2004
A contest entry
- Does this mean anything to you? by lilasunshinepants.
400 points, ended October 22, 2004, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow....it's almost
As though you were
Trying to tell the
World to stop
Procreating, like
We are a disease
And we need to be
Stopped...I like!
Keep it up!
~Nuttz~ -
great
the length isnt bad at all (personal opinion) but yea im not the judge lol. it is a nice write. seams like it is somthing you think alot about. but in the end it is a good write. keep up the good work.
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