the tears keep coming
the blood keeps flowing
im all alone
and no ones knowing
that im sittting here
with a puddle of blood
and i look of fear
i wish someone could understand
and know just how i feel
but i know that thats unreal
and no one can
im jsut sick of pretending
tired of acting
i wish this show could end
but the only way to end it is to
cut a little deeper
feel a little more pain
and just kill myself now
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Written October 21st, 2004
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well im sorry all my stuff is depressing but it helps me to get it out and if u cut too then you have no room to say it doesnt do nothing maybe it does help me ya know? and just beieng happy doesnt work for me and yeah ill read some of your stuff
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Yeah man like being all negative and sucidel won't get you any where like ever I know this from expeirence. Also cutting don't help nuttin either even though I do it but like try and be happy it is kinda working for me. Just list down the people that you know that they love you and all the good times from like 4th grade....Oh Nice poem you'll have to read some of mine
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thanx for the coment but the truth is i alerady tryed to kill myself more then once the last time i did it was the worst and i wound up in the hospital for 2 weeks and your right it didnt solve much and i know that cutting a little leads to deeper...i know cus im there
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If your really thinking of killing yourself, I wouldn't do it. It's the people that overcome depression of all the things that make you sad that become wiser and smarter and all in all usually a better person. Don't give up hope, cutting yourself a little right now won't always be enough and you'll have to go deeper and deeper, and you know what? That still doesn't solve anything.
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