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i wish you could see

i wish that you could see
     how much you mean to me
when i think about you leaving
     its hard for me to breathe
without you
     my lifes not the same
i wish i could take away all your pain
i pray everynight
   wishing you were happy
i pray that you dont hurt
   sometimes i fall asleep crying
i wanna make you better
     i wanna make you smile
i wanna see you happy
     even if it takes a while
i love you so much
   not a day goes by that i dont think about you
and i know if you died
     i would die too
i love you more then anything
     i wish that you could see
it breaks my heart to see you sad
                and that we barely talk
it hurts me to think about you smoking
     it hurts me to think about you cutting
it hurts me to think about you leaving
     but it kills me to think about you dieing
if i got one wish
    to do anything in the world
it would be to make you happy
    to see you truly smile
to fix everything thats wrong
       i will always be here no matter what
             and thats cus i love u


Author notes

this is a poem i wrote for my best friend david
Written October 21st, 2004

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  • Taza
    October 28, 2004
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    i really really like this one it is really catchy my like it alot keep up da good work