open your eyes to this filth of mine
this filth of ours
shared in a world of hate
just one look beyond
tear the veil that blinds your eyes
this is all we have
this is how we die.
graciously.
Author notes
this will probably be understood by few, if any, people.
Written October 21st, 2004
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hmmmmm (that means i like it)
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wonderfully short
yet intoxicatingly beautiful as always... -
graciously was sort of a twist at the end, that sort of word to put there so I am not sure if I understand.
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This is a wonderful write. I love the format as well. Sorry I cannot applaud your write I am out of applauses and am hosting a contest so I need my points
so very sorry. Great write and hopw to hear more new writes!
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My Madam Vixen, very powerful and confronting - I'm guessing it about world peace or more correctly world aggression (that's my read) - I like, thank you.
Edited on Oct 21, 4:34 p.m. because ''.
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