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To my Anonymous

i fell in love through your words,
the words that you wrote,
i fell in love through your poems,
each one rampid on emotion,
i fell in love through what they said,
how they told me about you...
I fell in love with you...
but you...you barely even know me..
one person knew, yes one of my friends knew,
did you know shes your friend too?
I fell in love with you...
but I have no clue what to do..

I fell in love with you,
and you haven't the slightest clue.

i fell in love with YOU,
but you don't love me too...
you have your own love..
of that i am sure.

But it didnt stop me...

I fell in love with you.

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meh...Georgi where r u when i need u Y_Y
Written October 21st, 2004

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  • lithium
    October 24, 2004
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    great poem!..who's he?


  • Cocoa Bubbles
    October 24, 2004
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    ...He doesn't know what he's missing

  • Seraph1885
    October 21, 2004
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    aww honey... you can't control love... it's stupid, it does what it wants to do... I don't know who you love, /I don't know if I know him... but all I can do is wish you good luck... It really sucks when you fall in love with someone and your are not even sure why... when I fell I wanted to get out of it because I got this feelign something will go wrong but everyone told me to follow your heart and i follwed my heart and end up with heart ache.... So, I wont tell you to follow your heart only because I always had bad experience following it... but umm.. I am rambling im gonna stop
    Love ya
    Seraph
    PS: Lovely poem...

  • JPuchyr
    October 21, 2004
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    fourth line i think you meant Rampant, but i'm not sure *hugs you tight* awww Sunny, someone would have to be a fool not to love you back *kisses you softly on the forehead* oh well, you know i love you *squeezes you tight* and this is a lovely expression of something i wish wasn't happening to you, which i dunno if it is or not cuz it's not a 'personal' poem but let's face it, poets write what they feel *squeezes you once more* bye hun