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Touched

Touched

He came....

He touched my soul

He left

I died


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Written October 20th, 2004

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  • Applesauce
    November 5, 2004
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    the picture and background rock, first of all. And they go along with the poem, in its own sense. It tells an upfront and stabbing story that describes almost every feeling. Wonderful . . .

    ~)()(baby girl)()(~