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I Cut Myself Today

I cut myself today
I will hate myself tomorrow
Like a curtain falling on a stage
My blood runs down my sorrow

I cut myself yesterday
It will bleed until tomorrow
I wish that I could feel the pain
It runs back up my sorrow

I remember when I cut myself
It was this time tomorrow
It bleed all up until yesterday
And still runs down my sorrow

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Written October 20th, 2004

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  • haunted blood
    October 21, 2004
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    i love it... its so expressive in the few lines that are there.. well spaced out and amazingly written.. i can exactly understand how that is cos i do it myself.. but i cna see that if a non cutter read that, they would begin to understand what goes through cutters' heads.. excellent stuff, well done xxxx

  • SorrowsBleed
    October 20, 2004
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    I really like this. I know exactly what you are saying and feeling.
    ~Ally~


  • October 20, 2004
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    really really good i cut and i feel you


  • October 20, 2004
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    interesting...