Welcome to an underground inferno,
walk through the gates of Hell,
eternal damnation is waiting,
one look at him you can tell.
Satan is cloaked in pure evil,
his abode is brimstone and fire,
screams of torment and torture,
resulting from sins of desire.
Pits of fire are now your home,
never to see the light of day,
roaming these caverns forever,
flesh from the bone peels away.
Lost souls never rest in darkness,
eyes kept open for all eternity,
spewing ashes from bottomless pits,
the foul stench remains permanently.
Souls wander endlessly through mazes,
getting lost now they forever roam,
refusing God as their Lord and Savior,
the flames of Hell their eternal home.
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Written October 19th, 2004
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What a definition of hell. Thank God there is a heaven. Very well written.
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Ah thank you. I wrote this about 3 months after I accepted Jesus in my heart. He has blessed me ever since. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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another brillant poem, the message you send in this poem is so true, it was excellent......
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Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. It is most appreciated. This was a terrific contest. Take care, Sandy
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Ahhh Yes I like... Great discription... I pictured fleash bubbling off and oozing out.. AWESOME WRITE
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Thank you for reading my poen and leaving a comment. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Does sound like a bad place to spend eternity. Thanks for the comment. I changed the in to of, it does sound better, thanks. Take care, Sandy
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I really won't know if it is real, I don't plan on going there or anywhere else any time soon. Thanks mucho for the comment. Take care Sandy
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ps...i have a background that has flames on the side bar, it is on one of my poems called ice cubes if you want to see if you might want to try it with this poem...the one you have here is great but it takes away from the serious nature of the poem. just a thought Miss Sandy
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too many people think hell is going to be something they can deal with if they end up there, i am sure not about to gamble on such a thing...good rhyme and flow on a subject that far too many avoid thinking about.
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chilling one sandy very graphic depiction of hell...just a thought the last line may be better as the flames of hell
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eek, can't i take along some spare skin, my bones might get chilly. well a good poem even though i don't really believe that's what will happen, but you never know lol
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Yea I hope it scares some people enough to think about what kind of life they are living. Even if only helps one lost soul. Thanks for the great comment.
It is always appreciated
Take care pozo,
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Wow, this is a scary but true poem- I liked it a lot and it made me think, although I'm hoping it has more of an effect on the less godly people on the site (can I say that
?). Good write, thanks for commenting on my poem My poem was more about not going away from a good thing
God bless,
Pozo
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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This is wonderful! Im mainly not one for the darker poems, but this kind of hit home and made me think about the future more. Good job!
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Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. I always appreciate your comments. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you Steff. You will walk in sunshine and never see the wraths of Hell. I loved your comment. Take care, Sandy
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WOw SANDY deep and dark. gREat Scary write.
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fantabulous
Interesting. Hell, hm, oh how often I'm told I'm going to go there. Sounds pretty sucky. Anywho, back to what i was saying, This was yet another fantabulous write. I loved it so so so so SO much! Great job portraying the imagery!!! It was brilliant
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