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Angel I Love you

The blank stare in your eye
During the night I’d look up and cry
Fall further under the stars
All the rides in all the cars
I’ll remember forever

Holding hands in the dark
Running half naked through the park
I’ll cry the blackest tears
Even though we aren’t near
I will be there from beginning to end

But it’s not easy to forget
All of the things you made me do
I will never regret
The three words that are still true
Angel, please..I love you

The tears I cried in the rain
Standing on the corner waiting
The make-out session at Thanksgiving
That taste is forever on my split lips
Little did I know that the end came

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Written October 19th, 2004

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