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Nicotine

The stains on my fingers are a sign of my addiction to nicotine.
The stains on my teeth are a sign of my addiction to nicotine.
The restlessness of the nights without nicotine are signs of my addiction of nicotine.
The emotional and physical with drawls are a sign of my addiction to nicotine.


I am addicted

addicted to nicotine

Author notes

poopy
Written October 19th, 2004

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  • November 18, 2004
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    not so fast nicotine lol we used to ahve an advert-cartoon saying that years ago. i need a cigarette now.

    this is a good piece of poetry that you have written and shared here. i enjoyed reading.

  • BeautiflDeadGrl
    October 23, 2004
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    ok...


  • Mishielle
    October 19, 2004
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    now that I look back it is funny LOL I don't know how i meant it to be!

  • LostFlavor
    October 19, 2004
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    I'm Smiling!

    I'm not sure if this was meant to be funny, but it rocked either way. Withdrawals is spelled like that. I think that's my only correction. Otherwise, nice job. It made me smile.

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