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Self Destruction

Tape me together
But I just keep falling apart
Pick up my pieces
Never to be whole again

Just let me sink down
Drown out
Die on the inside
Stop living lies for you

You can’t stop me
Not like before
When I thought you were somebody
Believed you were real

Your eyes lied to me
The way you wanted them to
The way I let them
How could you

Say you love me
Pretend to care
Take my hand
When you never meant to stay

Tape me together
Just let me sink down
You can’t stop me
Your eyes lied to me

But I just keep falling apart
Drowning out
Not like before
The way you wanted me to

Pick up my pieces
Let me die on the inside
I thought you were somebody real
The way I let you be

I’ll never be whole again
Used to live lies for you
Believed you were real
How could you

You can’t stop me
I’m falling apart
Try to pick up my pieces
You can’t stop me

You can’t stop me
From dying on the inside
No more lies for you
You can’t stop me

You can’t stop me
I know you’re nobody
No longer believe you’re real
You can’t stop me

You can’t stop me
The way you wanted to
Your eyes lied to me
You can’t stop me

How could you
Tape me together
For your eyes to lie to me
And let me fall apart

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Written October 19th, 2004

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  • bluexsakuras
    February 22, 2005
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    this is just so beautiful. it just drew me in. great work...

  • LadyPyriel
    October 25, 2004
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    wow

  • honeybe
    October 21, 2004
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    not a problem. here anytime.

  • LostParamour
    October 21, 2004
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    Thanks... Glad that you like it... I just sat down and poured myself out onto the paper... Thanks again...

  • honeybe
    October 20, 2004
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    very powerfuly worded, and very heartfelt. so real and so convinsing. keep it up. latter Honeybe

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