an alert ambitious author
artistically anguished and annoyed
approached an angry administration
arrogantly alone
afraid and anxious
ables an allegiance
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~ by Gregg Rowe ~
an alert ambitious author
artistically anguished and annoyed
approached an angry administration
arrogantly alone
afraid and anxious
ables an allegiance
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an alert ambitious author
artistically anguished and annoyed
approached an angry administration
arrogantly alone
afraid and anxious
ables an allegiance
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~Author notes
These words were given to me and I was instructed to write a poem with them. Hope it makes sense. 
Gregg
Written October 18th, 2004
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Ah , another authentic attention arousing artpiece as alluring as an artistic author
Reenie
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lol sorta reminds me of grade 5 or 6 and peer tutoring. We had to make our kids an alpabet book and I did all these sentances where every word began with that certain letter.
I like this, it's very descriptive. I can really see what you were trying to accomplish here and I'd say you succeeded.
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Dang... nice, lol. Most poems I read that try to use alliteration always have one or two words that don't start with the same letter, so I definitely have to commend you for starting EVERY word with "a"... Most times, you'll find illeration poems, and they'll be humorous... nothing wrong with that, but it does make it a little easier when you don't have to make sense. I love that this one makes sense, has a message, etc etc... I'm also loving the picture and background. It looks like the kind of thing I'd like to draw, if I could draw wings, or have a model... (most people aren't willing to model for fourteen year olda, sadly, lol) It's awesome! Keep on writing, I love it!
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Wow. That was good. I like it.
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Excellent
This is an excellent piece
You have talent to construct a whole poem with "a"'s 
The background really complimented the whole piece, too. I really enjoyed the read my friend. For some reason the shape of the picture reminds me of the Arwen Evenstar pendant, if you know what I mean. 
Thanks for the read and take care. Kate
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What fun.
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always audacious and alluring
asking alien aussie angel
are all angels airborne?
Loved it Gregg and i know exactly where you're going with this
I think
Love you Gregg
Alians are always around
ask anyone.
angels are always around
also, ask angelica.
Edited on Nov 03, 5:06 p.m. because ''. -
Wow...it makes perfect sense, Gregg! Beautiful...you are incredible!
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I think you arose to the challenge quite well. I wrote one of these many yrs ago called Cosmo the Cocky Crazy Cockateil(i forgot how to spell it). They are not as easy as it would seem to be.I understood what you were talking about , you being the warrior you are. Jacki
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actually it does make sense, and it is good too which is definately a plus, im glad to see you here, been missing you, and yes the picture is flat damned beautiful. kinda like the soul that put it here. (meaning on your poem you goof)
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fun poem. i love that it had a message that could be put through, even in the alliteration form
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first comment in this site: awesome poem! that must've been hard. alliteration (hey, there goes another 'a') is puzzling and fun. great read. take care
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perhaps the author and finisher of all faith was rebuked by one in the Bush adminstration because this truly Godlike man sought equality for ALL the masses rather then just for the well to do that had been blesssed with the greed of this earth, ignoring the wealth of the next life.....it is easier for a camel to get through the eye of a needle then for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven, even if his white house is a heavenly throne here on earth...lo...Artis
Edited on Oct 18, 10:04 p.m. because ''. -
against the angry angst of ancient apparitions an "a" is adequate as any apple, eh?! had fun reading this and offering "a" reply... needed the relief... thanks! r.
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I like the picture and the background. So you went for a challenge.. You came out on top darlin. This is really good for having all the words start with a... Quite the tongue twister if you wanted it to be Awesome write darlin
*~Rosey~*
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wooo...it must have been hard!i'm not talented enough to try something like that!it's awesome, it makes sense!!!good job on it, really
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great
I really love the picture so much. Its awesome! Love it! Keep up the good work! Hope to see more from you in the near near future. Like its always said, a picture is worth a thousand words! I think this one is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, people have different perspectives though but in the end, i think its all the same. Great job! My applauds to you!
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