Paint me a picture,
Or tell me a rhyme;
Give me your colours,
and I'll give you mine;
Show me your weaknesses,
let innocence show;
Let me protect you,
and help you to grow;
sharing together, is beauty
and pain;
Poetry beckons, together
we gain.......
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Written October 18th, 2004
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A great write, it was beautiful and well written
Thanks for commenting on my poem and keep writing, this was excellent
All the best,
Pozo
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Thank you Your are very kind in your comments and I appreciate it
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Many thanks Theo I appreciate your kind words
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This is exquisite. You have spoken volumes in such few words. You have a gift for being creatively expressive and I do so enjoy reading you. Your work is timeless.
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uh......wow, someone's really into their own work... i actually liked this piece. it rhymed and didn't seem offkey like some of the rhymes i've read. great job with that. the subject matter was tight and didn't stray so great job for that. i give it a 10...
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Thank you Yes I love all the artwork that I manage to acquire
Many thanks for the kind words
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loved this-short, sweet-excellent!
love the art!!!!
keep up the good work!
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Thank you for your very constructive comments, I do appreciate them
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Thank you Wattle, glad you liked it
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Thank you Rose I am pleased that you enjoyed this, I love getting your remarks, I appreciate it
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Thank you I appreciate your kind words
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Thank you James, I am glad you enjoyed this piece Many thanks for the kind words, they are appreciated
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Thanks my friend, ( even for looking for flaws ) Glad you liked it
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Thank you Cassie, glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you
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I have already used this comment today with regards to another poem, but I feel as though this deserves the same recognition. This poem has a very classical feel to it. Rhyming can be very difficult, but there is a potential to cheapen it by using obvious words in conjunction with one another. However, I see no use of such methods here, and that just makes the piece all the better. Thoroughly enjoyed your creation here, thank-you.
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Ms Cutie, very brief, very vivid, very nice to read - I like - thank you
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Great
This is wonderful! One of my favorites so far, this was great! I really enjoyed your writting here, beautiful, your rhymes were great and really powerful, the whole poem was really full of talent, amazing! Great work cutiepie!!!
Purplerose
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One of the best writes Ive read. Keep up the good work.
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Many thanks for the kind words
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A definitive piece on the joys of poetry. Giving back to us the message of importance that is stricken by the pen and how for humanity it is a need and not just something to be thoughtful about.
You grew this image withing me and I feel proud to have been blessed with such.
I raise my glass in toast to poetry and all the poets who etch their pen to paper.
much love,
James
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Deliciously Excellent
Well, one of my favorite poets strikes again. Woohoo!!
This was a really good read. I enjoyed it. Can you tell?
I can't find a flaw any where and I looked.
(((GriN)))
Keep up the good work hon.
Be well;
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wow, great rhyming, thats what first comes to mind. i also love the meaning of this, it just sounded really optimistic to me, and it made it quite enjoyable to read...loved it!
-cassie-
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Where would we be if we couldn't share with other people? Nice poem, lovey duck.
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another short but sweetie
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Good poem , ,with a message. The sharing of poetry is indeed an understanding of different ways of life.Especially good Poetry beckons,together we gain. I agree . Well done -
Thank you ... not quite sure where this came from... I stole the picture from somewhere and it seemd to fit
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Fantastic imagery, short and to the point with a perfect rhythm. This is an awesome write. I love the message it sends. Wonderful Lynne!!
~Lyrical
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