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Inspired




Language of angels:
Dewdrop clarity sunrise
A lotus shining


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Inspired by the poetry of Maatkara
Written October 18th, 2004

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  • Kevin Moderators member
    August 6
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    beautiful piece


  • Kari gold member
    December 28, 2006

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    This was very powerful and touching. I loved it. This fits Maatkaras poetry perfect. A lotus shining..yulp..that's for sure.

    Kari


  • MargaretG
    October 19, 2004
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    Beautiful images, sunrise glimmer.
    This is a lovely tribute to Maatkara.

  • sheshe143
    October 19, 2004
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    brav0
    this piece is so very lovely
    i have a haiku called 'Leech on Lotus' itz a litlle dark though. please leave me with your thoughts on it. thanx for sharing. i truly enjoyed!!!!
    =much respect=


  • Maatkara gold member
    October 19, 2004
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    Colin, did you mean to do a string of these: ?
    They still have the wrong symbol showing on the Help page.
    It's a colon then the letter 'f' for the flower, i.e. : f - only no space.

    ~ G

    P.S. The 'kissy' smiley I edited was accidental, putting an asterisk in the wrong place!
    Edited on Oct 19, 1:34 because 'messed up the symbols'.


  • ColinSJones
    October 18, 2004
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    /f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f///f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f//f/f/f/f/f//f/f/f/f/f/f/ff/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/ff/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f//f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    October 18, 2004
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    Inspired I gentle whisper this song of love on through
    Within a diamond heartbeat as I listen deeply to the you in you
    Lotus love sent from up above
    In dewdrops of shimmering love
    O holy is the angels rain within your sigh
    O holy sunrise as one twilight salvation within your eyes


  • Maatkara gold member
    October 18, 2004
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