Language of angels:
Dewdrop clarity sunrise
A lotus shining
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Inspired by the poetry of Maatkara
Written October 18th, 2004
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This was very powerful and touching. I loved it. This fits Maatkaras poetry perfect. A lotus shining..yulp..that's for sure.
Kari -
Beautiful images, sunrise glimmer.
This is a lovely tribute to Maatkara.
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brav0
this piece is so very lovely
i have a haiku called 'Leech on Lotus' itz a litlle dark though. please leave me with your thoughts on it. thanx for sharing. i truly enjoyed!!!!
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Colin, did you mean to do a string of these: ?
They still have the wrong symbol showing on the Help page.
It's a colon then the letter 'f' for the flower, i.e. : f - only no space.
~ G
P.S. The 'kissy' smiley I edited was accidental, putting an asterisk in the wrong place!
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Inspired I gentle whisper this song of love on through
Within a diamond heartbeat as I listen deeply to the you in you
Lotus love sent from up above
In dewdrops of shimmering love
O holy is the angels rain within your sigh
O holy sunrise as one twilight salvation within your eyes
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