My love I have missed you so much
your absence left me feeling so low,
How I longed for your gentle touch
no more dear heart will I let you go.
knowing you love me, takes away the fear
how I grieve when you’re not with me,
close in my heart you are so near,
we are where we are meant to be.
Safe in your embrace I will stay
God sent you to me without a doubt.
Thank God for your return this day
To the whole universe I will shout.
Because you love me.
Author notes
7th placing.
Written October 18th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Story by bethany may.
300 points, ended December 7, 2004, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
Jen you are a true romantic.
Hugs
Jan
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excellent
A delightful poem. So sincere and warm. I have little to say about this I am sitting here purring over it.
HUGS
Jan -
NOT ME COOKIE!! He's long gone, when I found out he was cheating on me
he's the one with the problem 
Jenn -
Sorry Jen, clicked "next" again to find another love poem.
I think you have a problem
R. -
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[delete ] [history] [reply] Am8ur (im) made a comment on Because you love me (reply):
'gorgeous!!!! the poem was adorable. the imagery was spectacular! you have done an incredible job with this, have you ever written a dud??? i don't think you are capable of anything less than perfection. I am soooooooo envious!
Til
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Great portrayal of emotion.
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The first thing I said when I went to read your poem, was, I love this already, the picture is so sweet, gave me a warm feeling, your poem is excellent, even though I have been married a long time, hubby is away and this poem is so perfect for me right now....love the feeling it brings to me! Best of luck in the contest, it's great! Ann
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4 stars ****
.. i just wish someone may write such a write for me... muaahzz... take your chin away 
.. the kiss is for this poem.. and yes... your rhyme is perfect.. it really adds a lot interest in the poem... and adds depth to the feelongs.. nice write.. take cares and have a nice time... just keep it up dear jenifer... yur humble little friend.. 
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... - vic ( who else? )
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Thank you Bethany
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this is sweet and yes it does fit in my contest....so please don't take it out....I love it..and plus its your love story...I just gave you an idea of how to write it....i think I will have to give you an applause...Luv Caz
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Beautiful
Very beautiful, Jennifer. Romantically said and from the depth of your heart.
May God bless you both.
Love from India - Joel - -
This is so tender and loving. The love is felt deep down to my toes.
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Hello Abdul, how are you my dear friend, we can never seem to be on Ap at the same time. Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem. We will get to talk one day my dear-Jenni
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH my God what a nice peom oh i winder what kind opf poet u are really ur poem are so enduring so aroant if i ma use thi wor wellwhjat u wish is what uare goig to getu will fine what pleasesu most jenifer
send me ims okit be ong i hear from uy
Abdul -
Very lovely - and so close to being a true sonnet. I'll have to look up more of your poems.
Will
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