The waves crashed against the rocks,
The sea-creature watched the rough sea,
The wind blowing through her golden locks,
Waiting, waiting, just waiting to see.
The stars shone brightly in the night sky,
She drifted away in a day dream,
There she would sit, there she would lie,
Everything was down to earth, as it seemed.
Her scales caught the reflection of the moon,
Every breath she took felt good,
She loved the sea, especially, in the morning, before noon.
The sea smelt of pure salt, just like it should.
The waves crashed against the rocks,
The sea-creature watched the rough sea,
The wind blowing through her golden locks,
Waiting, waiting, just waiting to see....
Author notes
Written October 17th, 2004
A contest entry
- Inspire Me (Contest) by .
300 points, ended October 23, 2004, 6 entries
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Lovely imaginary and desription! I like how you put the 1st stanza at the end aswell. Good luck and thanks for entering
Laura xXx -
I loved the rhyming in this, and your imagery was beautiful, and the verses flowed really well. I really liked it, I agree, it was very pretty.
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Oh I love it!
Its so prettiful! (Ok I can be special)
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