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The Twilight Hour (Triolet)

The clock, bonging in the twilight hour
As mice scurry to run their steed
A loud thump: tail that devour
The clock, bonging in the twilight hour

Holding a trap mouse into carte du jour
With juicy treats for wicked cat feeds
The clock, bonging in the twilight hour
As mice scurry to run their steed

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Written October 17th, 2004

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  • kendhal22 gold member
    October 20, 2004
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    I'm glad you like. Kendhal22

  • Delphinidae
    October 20, 2004
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    I totally pictured that children's nursery rhyme.. tick tock the mouse ran up the clock.. something like that. I can't quite remember, lol. I can just see these mice causing havoc in the early hours of the morning. An enjoyable read.

    Thank you for entering my contest,
    Christine