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deep eyes to drown in
only he exists
yesterday smudges around the edges
one on one, he makes me
understand
silent words mean
everything
endless touch so blissfully tortuous.
then he kisses me
holding me tight
and he knows
that
i am
melting
intensely burning
needing him
lately I have smiled so much
oblivious to "what if?"
vividly absorbing him.
every little detail.
what price for my heart?
internally bleeding with invisible scars
(teach me to trust)
hold me close.
yesterday smudges around the edges
only he exists
utopia?
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For Richard.
Written October 17th, 2004
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i really like this. really deep and it is just flowing with power and some lust as well. im not the greatest critic but man this was an awesome poem. great work
sara -
beautiful beautiful beautiful
good luck to you, hope it stays like that
love Sophie
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This is really good thanks for sharing
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sigh.
just....sigh.
yeah. -
I hope you have found your utopia, everyone knows you deserve to be happy and blissful.
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its kinda like riding a bike. even though you dont do it all the time, you never forget how. just make damn sure you hang on. with both hands even.
i knew you were smiling.....i could tell all the way over here.
loves ya.
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lol, at the dictionary definition here. my uncle used to own a video shop called utopia.
im glad you've finally found
lately I have smiled so much
oblivious to "what if?"
i know you find that hard. -
Entry: utopia
Function: noun
Definition: ideal
Synonyms: arcadia, bliss, dreamland, dreamworld, Eden, Elysian fields, Erewhon, fairyland, heaven, never-never land, paradise, perfection, promised land, seventh heaven, Shangri-La, wonderland
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