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No More For You

Your love was cold and you came too fast and it's the last time you'll see my little ass.

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Written October 16th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • FlawedDestiny
    October 17, 2004
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    Oh my God this is great. One of the best one's I've seen yet!!! Best of luck to you in the contest. {Yeah, right like you'll need it.} I think this is very funny!
    ~*Destiny*~