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Sometimes I hate him! (two line contest)

I’ve been screaming ever since I met him.

OH GOD -- PLEASE DON’T STOP!

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No man should ever be that good!
Written October 16th, 2004

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  • Porcelain
    October 22, 2004
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    Ha! This is great... you just turn the whole thing around. I love surprise endings, and it's even more impressive when you can pull one of those out of only two lines. Excellent.


  • sweetestkiss1985
    October 20, 2004
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    This poem is hilarious!!!! When I first read it I couldn't stop laughing. I will give you a dozen roses. .


  • J Rhys Davies
    October 18, 2004
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    This is flipping hilarious! I read the first line and thought, oh no, here is another one of those man-hating ones. What a pleasant surprise the second line was. Thanks for the chuckle.

    ~ John


  • Desiree Darkk
    October 16, 2004
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    Well he should be that good but most of the time isn't. For some reason this reminded me of that old popeye cartoon where oliveoil had was kissing popeye and he was yelling. Don't. Stop. Don't stop don't stop don't stop. etc. Oh well probably just me. Thanks for entering the contest.

    Desiree


  • TillyMay
    October 16, 2004
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    Haaaa, well said.


  • macandrew
    October 16, 2004
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    very good (apparently)

    Very well done. Hope your voice holds out.

    Big smiles
    John

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