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she said she had a minute,
I was limp but not stupid.

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Written October 16th, 2004

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 19, 2004
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    need you say more? ROFL! This was concise!

  • Valkricry
    October 18, 2004
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    Geeze...lol
    Val


  • cvillelisa
    October 16, 2004
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    i didn't know you had a limp? eh. that's okay .. at least everything else works.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 16, 2004
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    HAHAHAH very cleverly done... heheh not stupid indeed..


  • TillyMay
    October 16, 2004
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    Limp is better than stupid...I can work with limp.
    Oy.
    Clever, this.


  • macandrew
    October 16, 2004
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    very good

    Haven't seen you around Lute. Well done, certainly got a laugh.

    thanks,
    John


  • micha
    October 16, 2004
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    !!!!!
    musta been fast, sheesh! (Cialis? lolol, oh, geeeez, lmao!)


  • Desiree Darkk
    October 16, 2004
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    lol. Okay give me a minute. hahahaha


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    October 16, 2004
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    ROFLMAO This was great. I loved it. Patti

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